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Year 1/2 have been working hard this term to create their own multimedia stories using a program called 2Create a Superstory, adding illustrations, animations and sound effects to their typed text. We would love to read your comments on them.
Posted by Mr Haughton on 26 May 2010 in Year 1/2 | Permalink
I Love the stories. The wolf, shark and knight are just a little too scary for me! (Sound of knees knocking)
Phil Bagge @baggiepr |
26 May 2010 at 07:28 PM
Thanks - really enjoyed reading these - they are just as good as the Magic Key stories. I especially liked the idea of a magic pen, almost like you can start writing and let your imagination take you somewhere else!
26 May 2010 at 07:36 PM
Excellent stories and some great ideas. Well done to all the children and thank you for sharing them with people.
26 May 2010 at 08:58 PM
Excellent work Year 1&2 - I will show your work to my Year 3&4's to show them how clever and imaginative you are.
Mr Hill |
26 May 2010 at 09:04 PM
What a wonderful selection of stories, you must have worked so hard! Well done and thank you for sharing!
26 May 2010 at 09:13 PM
Great stories you are obviously all great writers. Have you tried adding sound to make them talking books? I have worked with children using 2 Create A story and Activ primary to create books but yours stories are particularly good. The animation is much better with 2CASS too! If you want to share some books other children look at http://hias.hants.gov.uk/ict/mod/resource/view.php?id=692.
26 May 2010 at 11:16 PM
What great stories! You must have all worked really hard to write them. I loved all the different characters and the way you used the speech bubbles so I knew what they were saying. Well done everyone!
Caroline Breyley |
27 May 2010 at 08:53 PM
I'm sorry, did I get lost? Mr Haughton said these stories were written by Year 1 and 2, but they are far too good for children THAT young!
I am very impressed with your stories. I love the sharks and witches!
When I use 2CASS with my class in September, can I come to you for some help?
Keep up the good work, Ian Addison
ian addison |
27 May 2010 at 08:58 PM
Wow these stories arefantastic!!!! I'll be showing them to my year 3class - I bet they would love to leave some comments too!!Keep up the fantastic work!
Miss Deane |
27 May 2010 at 09:06 PM
Wow!! What fantastic stories! I'm going to show the children at Heathfield Primary School these! They will love Reading them! Thanks for sharing them.
Mr Mitchell |
27 May 2010 at 09:15 PM
What brilliant stories! The sharks frightened me. I hope none are in my goldfish pond!
Keep writing great stories.
Rob Ellis |
27 May 2010 at 09:30 PM
Great imaginative stories. Well done year 1/2. You have clearly put a lot of work into these. Sharks, witches and wolves ooh - I am glad they came back safely. I like happy endings.
Susan Banister |
27 May 2010 at 10:35 PM
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